NIQUE PRODUCTION: Can’t B Good

Tuesday, September 6, 2011

Can’t B Good

Can’t B Good-Preview of upcoming novel

Have you ever had a feeling where your relationship went horrible and it had you thinking “This can’t be good?”

Well, Nora Brown has been in a relationship with her ex-boyfriend Carlos Hernandez ever since the Big Brother and Big Sister Program. The both of them have been friends for 7 whole years into the program going strong.

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My First Book that I made changes to my novel this is just a draft.

My Boyfriend and My Best Friend

Laila has been with Chris ever since high school. After being assigned a class trip to Atlanta Georgia. Laila's best friend Gabriella comes out of nowhere becomes friends with Laila's half brother Hani and becomes friends with Chris also. Later; in the story Hani gets shot after being shot a first time then gets shot for the 2nd time after being involved in a drug scene.

Gabriella turns to Chris for support and comfort. Laila finds

out later after finding out the news that Tiffany had a baby

by Chris. Laila also finds out that later into the story that

Gabriella is sneaking around with Chris and is Laila's birth

sister. Will Laila forgive her newly founded sister and still forgive

Chris? How will others respond after reading the story about

gang violence, betrayal, and sister love?

Chapter 1

Week 1 before the school dance.

A 5'6 women with raven-black, dark medium length hair in a bang, bright brown eyes, long lashes, full lips, dark glowing skin, not your average dream girl body type but, small body figured, wearing Nike ball shorts, Nike Shirt and Nike sneakers enters the gym for her very first time.

“Hi, may I help you?” The gentle asks the women.

The lady looks at the man with a 5'11, atheletic body built, light skin, honey brown eyes, medium waves but, spikey black hair and white teeth. “Hi, I'm looking for Gym B.” The women says.

“What's your name sweety?” Laila Moore.

“I'm Chris Gibbins. I help out in both gyms A and B. May I escort you to were your going?” Chris asks.

“Sure.” Laila says.

Chris and Laila walks to Gym B.

“May I ask you something?” Chris asks.

“Go ahead.” Laila says.

“Have you ever went to Maxwell High? You look familiar.” Chris asks.

“Yes, I have. Why?” Laila asks.

“Nothing, I just remembered something.” Chris said.

“What would that be?” Laila asks.
“Was one of your teachers Mr. TJ?” Chris asks.

“Yes?” Laila raises her eyebrow.
“You don't remember who I am, Do you?” Chris asks.

“Wait, you were in Ms. Jamesclassroom across from mines right?” Laila remembers.

“Yea.” Chris smiles.

“Oh wow, we were close we use to live right next to each other.” Where have you been?” Laila playfully hits Chris.

“I moved here. I just do volunteer work after school here.” Chris tells Laila.

“Man, times have changed a lot since the last time we've spoken to each other.” Laila tells Chris.

“I know right they have. So, where do you stay at?” Chris asks.

“On Landsdowne, what about you.?” Laila asks.

“Which part?” Raises his eyebrow.

“60^th.” What about you?” Laila asks.

“62^nd. It's close though.” Chris says.

“Yea it is.” Laila tells Chris.

“So what you about to do at the gym?” Chris asks.

“Well, I'm getting ready for the beach this summer so I just came here to get pumped up. I'm actually new here.” Laila says.

“I can help you if you want.” Chris says.

“Thanks I appreciate it.” Laila says walking over to the bench press. Works out for about 30 minutes then goes to the treadmill, ab machines and then pauses.

“Excuse me.” Laila calls Chris over.

“What's up?” Chris walks over to Laila.

“Can you help me?” Laila tells Chris.

Chris shows Laila the proper way to use the ab machines.

“Thank you.” Laila smiles.

“No problem. I'll be right back. I'm about to make a quick phone call.” Chris tells Laila.

“Ok.” Laila blushes.

Chris walks over to the phone calls one of his friends.

“Hello, Jonathin speaking.” Jonathin answers the phone.

“Hey man, this is Chris. What's up J? Chris speaks back.

“What's up?” Jonathin speaks into the phone.

“Guess who's at the gym?” Tells Jonathin while looking at Laila.

“Who?” Jonathin asks.

“Laila.” Chris says back into the phone. “I really miss talking to her.”

“Well, then talk to her.” Jonathin says back into the phone.

“You think I should?” Chris asks.
“Uh, yea, the both of you haven't spoken in a while so go talk to her.” Jonathin says into the phone.

“Alright, I know you got something to do so I'm going to let you go.” Chris says into the phone.

(Which one is better) This one or the other one.
Remember this is just a draft

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Tuesday, September 6, 2011

Can’t B Good

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